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Lines To -And By- Emily by ~MsStarryskye:iconMsStarryskye:



I
Unto my books so good to turn,
I many times thought peace had come
like trains of cars on tracks of plush.

II
Split the lark and you'll find the music;
my cocoon tightens, colors tease
the murmur of a bee.

III
While I was fearing it, it came:
Delight becomes pictorial.
It struck me every day:
I see thee better in the dark.

IV
My Wheel is in the dark --
Much madness is divinest sense,
the soul unto herself,
her grace is all she has.

V
Could I but ride indefinite,
the moon was but a chin of gold.
Not knowing when the dawn will come,
I dreaded that first robin so.

VI
The last night that she lived,
the sun kept setting, setting still;
the murmuring of bees had ceased.

VII
I died for beauty but was scarce;
I lived on dread; to those who know:

we learn in the retreating

as imperceptibly as grief.
©2008-2009 ~MsStarryskye
:iconmsstarryskye:

Author's Comments

This is a found poem created by compiling first lines that I found in the index of first lines in a compilation of Emily Dickinson's works. All of the clusters were found as they are in stanzas 1-6 -- I found it interesting that they almost seemed to be in conversation with another. VII was the cluster of 2, then I skipped some lines to achieve the penultimate line, and skipped some more lines to use the final line ( as indicated by line breaks).

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:iconb1gfan:
The serendipitous connections and, as you say conversation, that develops here is very interesting.

VI is strikingly good!
:iconmsstarryskye:
Thank you! It was just me scanning and looking for the connections - I added some punctuation but didn't want to change it so that the pronouns all fit... I like how II and VI are connected as well. VI is my favorite as well. :D Thanks for the feedback!
:icondesertlion:
the words, when read aloud
tickles my throat
and spins my head howling madly

i always like that feeling
but i rarely get to ride
thank you
:iconmsstarryskye:
Thank you :) Wish they were my words... but glad you enjoyed it :D
:icondesertlion:
...there not??
hmmm....ARE THEY EMILY'S!!!!!!!?
:icondesertlion:
LBW...hmmm...are you african american?
:iconmsstarryskye:
No, pasty pale, I'm afraid!
:icondesertlion:
nope
...i was right the first time

or photoshop was right?
:iconmsstarryskye:
Yes, they are Emily Dickinson's, as found in clusters in an index of first lines.

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